HI248{"id":230,"date":"2020-08-05T05:36:44","date_gmt":"2020-08-05T05:36:44","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/blog\/?p=230"},"modified":"2024-10-10T13:34:14","modified_gmt":"2024-10-10T13:34:14","slug":"avoid-lengthy-subjects-in-academic-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/blog\/avoid-lengthy-subjects-in-academic-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Avoid Lengthy Subjects in Academic Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Academic writing can surely be daunting for a lot of researchers. Communicating major concepts of your research work with precision is never that straightforward. Any level of ambiguity can have dire consequences that include rejection by the publisher. That\u2019s why it is paramount for a researcher to be well-versed with the fundamental rules of grammar and sentence structure. Eliminating lengthy subjects in sentences is a great place to begin your journey towards publication success.<\/p>\n<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_50 counter-hierarchy ez-toc-counter ez-toc-grey ez-toc-container-direction\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title\">Table of Contents<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><a href=\"#\" class=\"ez-toc-pull-right ez-toc-btn ez-toc-btn-xs ez-toc-btn-default ez-toc-toggle\" aria-label=\"Toggle Table of Content\" role=\"button\"><label for=\"item-69e442aa4abe3\" aria-hidden=\"true\"><span style=\"display: flex;align-items: center;width: 35px;height: 30px;justify-content: center;direction:ltr;\"><svg style=\"fill: #999;color:#999\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" class=\"list-377408\" width=\"20px\" height=\"20px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" fill=\"none\"><path d=\"M6 6H4v2h2V6zm14 0H8v2h12V6zM4 11h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2zM4 16h2v2H4v-2zm16 0H8v2h12v-2z\" fill=\"currentColor\"><\/path><\/svg><svg style=\"fill: #999;color:#999\" class=\"arrow-unsorted-368013\" xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" width=\"10px\" height=\"10px\" viewBox=\"0 0 24 24\" version=\"1.2\" baseProfile=\"tiny\"><path d=\"M18.2 9.3l-6.2-6.3-6.2 6.3c-.2.2-.3.4-.3.7s.1.5.3.7c.2.2.4.3.7.3h11c.3 0 .5-.1.7-.3.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7zM5.8 14.7l6.2 6.3 6.2-6.3c.2-.2.3-.5.3-.7s-.1-.5-.3-.7c-.2-.2-.4-.3-.7-.3h-11c-.3 0-.5.1-.7.3-.2.2-.3.5-.3.7s.1.5.3.7z\"\/><\/svg><\/span><\/label><input  type=\"checkbox\" id=\"item-69e442aa4abe3\"><\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<nav><ul class='ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1 ' ><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/blog\/avoid-lengthy-subjects-in-academic-writing\/#The_Significance_of_Subject-Verb_Agreement\" title=\"The Significance of Subject-Verb Agreement\">The Significance of Subject-Verb Agreement<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/blog\/avoid-lengthy-subjects-in-academic-writing\/#The_Adverse_Impact_of_Lengthy_Subjects\" title=\"The Adverse Impact of Lengthy Subjects\">The Adverse Impact of Lengthy Subjects<\/a><\/li><li class='ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-3'><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-3\" href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/blog\/avoid-lengthy-subjects-in-academic-writing\/#A_Step_Closer_to_Becoming_a_Superior_Writer\" title=\"A Step Closer to Becoming a Superior Writer\">A Step Closer to Becoming a Superior Writer<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_Significance_of_Subject-Verb_Agreement\"><\/span><strong>The Significance of Subject-Verb Agreement<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p>Constructing effective sentences is crucial in all types of <a href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/\">formal writing<\/a>. It\u2019s vital to recognize that every sentence has a subject and a predicate. The subject is the noun executing an action and the predicate is the verb explaining that action. In formal writing, subject-verb agreement gives your ideas clarity and showcases your writing acumen.<\/p>\n<p>Given below is an example of subject-verb agreement. The verb is in <strong>bold<\/strong> and the subject is <em>italicized<\/em>.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><em>The CEO of the organization<\/em>\u00a0<strong>gave<\/strong>\u00a0her employees a bonus.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>In the above example, it\u2019s evident that the person executing the action is \u201c<em>The CEO of the organization,<\/em>\u201d and the action executed is the verb \u201cgave,\u201d the past verb form of \u201cto give.\u201d If the subject and verb did not agree, the sentence would\u2019ve appeared awkward and unclear. Now, let\u2019s figure out why lengthy subjects can be a problem.<\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"The_Adverse_Impact_of_Lengthy_Subjects\"><\/span><strong>The Adverse Impact of Lengthy Subjects<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p>Given its formal nature, academic writing must be crystal clear. Lengthy subjects can make the writing unclear. Here are three sentences with lengthy subjects:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><em>The best advantage presented to the staff of the L1 and L2 shop floors<\/em> was the specialized management programs.<\/li>\n<li><em>For Stella to take me to my parents\u2019 home town on our anniversary<\/em>\u00a0was truly thoughtful.<\/li>\n<li><em>To be able to go to the concert on my birthday<\/em>\u00a0was really heartening.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The common thread with all the examples is that the subject is too long and the predicate shorter in comparison. A lengthier subject naturally results in prolonging the time it takes to get to the crux. All three sentences must be restructured to have better clarity and to make them easier to read.<\/p>\n<p>Here are the revised versions with effective sentence structures:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><em>The best advantage presented to the staff of the L1 and L2 shop floors<\/em> was the specialized management programs.\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Revised version<\/strong>:<em> The specialized management programs <\/em>were the best advantage presented to the staff of the L1 and L2 shop floors.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li><em>For Stella to take me to my parents\u2019 home town on our anniversary<\/em>\u00a0was truly thoughtful.\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Revised Version<\/strong>:<em> It was truly thoughtful of Stella<\/em> to take me to my parents\u2019 home town on our anniversary.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<li><em>To be able to go to the concert on my birthday<\/em>\u00a0was really heartening.\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Revised Version<\/strong>:<em> It was really heartening<\/em> to go to the concert on my birthday.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"A_Step_Closer_to_Becoming_a_Superior_Writer\"><\/span><strong>A Step Closer to Becoming a Superior Writer<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p>Were you able to identify the dissimilarities between all the above examples? Do you believe you have a clear understanding of how the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/\">restructured sentences<\/a> are easier to comprehend? If your instinct says \u201cyes,\u201d then you\u2019re already on the right track to becoming a superior academic writer. It\u2019s essential to recognize the principles of writing, which include rules of grammar. Once your fundamentals are solid, you will surely be able to express your original ideas with clarity. That will, inevitably, result in long-term publication success.<\/p>\n<p>How to eliminate lengthy subjects in formal writing? It would be great if you could share your thoughts and recommendations in the comments segment below.<\/p>\n<p>And if you are looking to ensure your writing is ready for the global audience, try out <a href=\"https:\/\/www.trinka.ai\/\">Trinka<\/a>, the world\u2019s first language enhancement tool that is custom-built for academic and technical writing, and works with the author to enhance the writing quality.<\/p>\n<!-- AddThis Advanced Settings generic via filter on the_content --><!-- AddThis Share Buttons generic via filter on the_content -->","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Academic writing can surely be daunting for a lot of researchers. Communicating major concepts of your research work with precision is never that straightforward. Any level of ambiguity can have dire consequences that include rejection by the publisher. 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